Just a design a started working on for a t-shirt

not finished yet and dont know if i like the style but gimme some feedback

looks like the dude is holding a cig for the sun lol

new official name of the shirt is

Sunny Side Up

no john he is clearly picking the suns nose! LOL

its interesting, how big is the decal going to be on the shirt cuz if its that size or larger it better be the back. O.o


oh, ps it also looks like the sun is taking a pee behind the cloud and acting like hes so0o not "doo da doo da doo" says the sun. LOL

havent decided upon a final design scheme (front/back) yet but well make sure it looks good

1. The cloud looks more like the Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man's butt than a cloud.
2. Everything except the raindrops and buildings has a black outline around it. All or nothing.
3. The lightning bolt can be moved down a little bit further from the cloud so the top of the middle jagged part shows up a little more. Basically, right now it looks like an upside-down yellow mountain, not a lightning bolt.


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4. The sun has eyes but the dude doesn't.
5. Nice use of the background gradient.

yea i usually abide by the all or nothing line rule and like i said its not completely finalized yet, it was just what i had thrown together that this point, ill give it a go this afternoon